The Importance of an Exploding Sandwich by @JulieFalatko and GIVEAWAY

Has this ever happened to you? You come up with an amazing idea for a story. Let’s say it’ssnappsy about a boy who wants a dog, and all the things he does to convince his parents to get him a dog. You work on it, revise it, make it better. You’re feeling pretty good about Ben and the Dog Campaign. And then you’re standing in a bookstore and, under a cloud of dread, you pick up Bob Lobbies for a Dog. It’s essentially the same as your story.

Or maybe you don’t even get that far. Maybe you write Ben and the Dog Campaign and even though you love it, there’s a funny feeling in your stomach when you read it. A feeling that says, “This is kind of flat.”  A feeling that says: “So what?”

And let me tell you this: you never want to think, “So what?” after reading a story.

You, my friend, need an exploding sandwich.

Don’t hide behind that bush! It’s a metaphorical exploding sandwich. All I mean is that you need a surprise, and not a something-jumps-out surprise so much as an aliens-fly-down-and-luckily-make-amazing-tuna-salad surprise. Something that says “that is great” instead of “so what?”

So many picture books can be grouped into the same category. Pet-wanting books, difficult-bedtime books, first-day-of-school books, moving-to-a-new-house books. There’s a reason for all those books. Kids do want pets. They don’t want to go to bed.

You can absolutely write a book in one of these categories, but you want yours to stand out. You don’t want an agent or editor to read the pitch for your book and unsuccessfully suppress a yawn. Which would you read first?

Ben wants a dog, but his mom says no way. Ben shows her he’s responsible by putting out food twice a day, walking himself around the block, and brushing the couch. All his hard work pays off, and in the end his parents take him to the shelter to pick out his new best friend! Kids will learn the value of hard work. For fans of literally every boring pet picture book ever.

Ben wants a dog, but his mom says no way. So Ben builds a Rube Goldberg device to free all the dogs from the pound and lure them to his backyard. Surely his mom won’t be able to resist all those cute furry faces? But when things go horribly awry, Ben is left with a surprising new best friend: an octopus. For fans of Billy Twitters and His Blue Whale Problem, Sophie’s Squash, Cecil the Pet Glacier, and Sparky.

You might ask: how? I’ve found the best way to do this, and also add a lot of humor to your story, is to start mashing things up.

Do you have two stories that aren’t quite working? Smush them together. Maybe you have a bedtime story that’s kind of dull, and a story about a loud robot that you can’t find an ending for. Mash those two together. I know they have nothing in common, except always remember that they have you in common, which is not a small thing. So you make a story where bedtime doesn’t go well because that robot is just so loud. That’ll stand out much more on the shelf, and it’ll be funnier too.

I had the hardest time with revisions on my picture book The Society of Underrepresented Animals. My editor and I had been working to make it better, but it still had a small nagging “so what?” feeling. In desperation, I wrote five different versions of the story with very different plots. None of those was quite right either, though. So I smushed the best parts of them together, and that’s what finally worked.

You don’t even have to do it with the whole story, you can just throw in a few small exploding sandwiches. Make a park bench wearing sneakers deliver sage advice. Have one boy carry a tuba around everywhere. Change a character into a kitten who dreams of running her own popsicle truck franchise. The key is to be silly, surprising, and memorable. And the real trick is to make it work for your book. I bet, though, that once you tell your brain you want an exploding sandwich, suddenly you’ll see how that makes the story come together. That boy with the tuba? He uses it to call to the elephant who runs to the tree and saves Popsicle Kitten, who got stuck up there dreaming of new flavors for her Catsicle fleet. Or whatever. Your brain likes fun. Your brain likes surprises. Your brain will be delighted by the challenge and will have fun connecting the dots.

And so will readers.

FalatkoJ_headshotJulie Falatko debut picture book is Snappsy the Alligator (Did Not Ask to Be in This Book), illustrated by Tim Miller (Viking). She is also the author of The Society of Underrepresented Animals, illustrated by Charles Santoso (Viking, 2018), and Help Wanted: One Rooster(Viking, 2019).

You can visit her website at www.juliefalatko.com or find her on Twitter @JulieFalatko or on Facebook at www.facebook.com/JulieFalatkoAuthor.

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339 comments on “The Importance of an Exploding Sandwich by @JulieFalatko and GIVEAWAY

  1. Caroline says:

    Julie, you already know I love you and your writing. And here in just on sentence, you just encouraged every writer: “I know they have nothing in common, except always remember that they have you in common, which is not a small thing.” <– Yes. Awesome.
    Thank you for sharing your smashing smushing advice here!

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  2. theresenagi says:

    Julie thanks for your suggestion to mash up stories with humor and a surprise!

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  3. bucklessclass says:

    I LOVE the exploding sandwich analogy! 🙂

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  4. donnacangelosi says:

    Thanks for a fun post, Julie. Almost as much fun as Snappsy!

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  5. Cindy Jolley says:

    Julie, I love your creative mash up ideas! What a great way to mix things up and add the perfect spice!

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  6. Characters need to be relatable but also unique for readers to remember them. You’ve shared some great ideas to achieve that. Thanks.

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  7. patti says:

    Great encouragement. I wanted to download the exercise, but can’t get in. I typed my e-mail and the password given in the “tomorrow is the first day” post. Was the password changed? Thanks.

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  8. angelcat2014 says:

    I love the idea of smashing things together. The exercise in the workbook looks like a lot of fun and I can’t wait to play. Thank you. 🙂

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  9. Marge Gower says:

    I was registered ahead of time and I don’t have a password to get into the exercise book. I can’t even find a place to click into the exercise book. HELP thanks

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  10. What a day brightener! Thanks for this post.

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  11. Sandi Lawson says:

    I love the exploding sandwich!

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  12. csheer18 says:

    Summer is for smushing! Thanks for the reminder, Julie….and congrats on your upcoming new books!

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  13. Julia says:

    I love this idea. Can’t wait to try it out on my current project.

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  14. Kristen C.S. says:

    Yes, I can see my kids giggling wildly over these silly mash ups. Great exploding food for thought. =)

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  15. Congrats on what looks to be a delightful new book. I love your titles! thanks for sharing at Kidlit. 🙂

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  16. Sue Heavenrich says:

    exploding sandwiches and other surprises! definitely!

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  17. Nadine Poper says:

    As an elementary librarian, I will have fun with Snappsy this coming school year! Thanks for the exploding sandwich tips.

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  18. winemama says:

    Thanks for the post!

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  19. 01chicchick says:

    An exploding sandwich! Interesting idea! Very unique!

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  20. Amy Benoit says:

    I’ve never really thought to do the “mash…” but now you’ve created a monster! 😉 Thanks for the fab advice.

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  21. teresamis says:

    Nothing like an exploding sandwich to get the KidLit summer school lunch room hopping! Thanks, Julie.

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  22. Gabi Snyder says:

    Mash it up = great advice! Thanks, Julie!

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  23. Dawn Simon says:

    Such a great idea to smash things together!

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  24. Pia Garneau says:

    I’d like one order of an exploding sandwich, please. Excellent post! Thank you!

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  25. Daniela Guardiola says:

    Thank you very much for taking us through this process. As a published author, you give us much hope as we struggle with ideas and lack of them. I love the idea of mashing different topics or stories and allowing them to take you in a new direction. You’re right! The one thing that unites them is the writer and he/she can take the story in any array of possibilities.

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  26. Susan Cabael says:

    Ready to smush & explode! I certainly have many pieces of stories that aren’t working to use in a new one.

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  27. It feels reassuring that unrelated ideas can work together. Because it seems my head is full of unrelated ideas. I looked up your book on Amazon and it looks adorable.

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  28. Thanks for the brainstorming advice and the wonderful post! I’ll be looking over my pbs that don’t quite seem to work and see what I can mash together! Fun!

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  29. phyllis chery says:

    You just made my day! thank you – combining ideas from two books – so it doesn’t make sense? okay. I’ll do it anyway. Thank you.

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  30. Leah Heilman Schanke says:

    What wonderful encouragement to think creatively. Thank you for a fun post!

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  31. Erin says:

    What a fun giveaway! I love your ideas to make things clever.

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  32. I would love to read Snappsy! If I won it, the wait list at for your book at the library would be one person shorter!

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  33. Karen Leiby Belli says:

    I bought Snappsy for my grandson and he loves it! Thanks for the “standout” tip.

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